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This piece is so accessible, so real, that as I listened, I began to feel as if an old timer in a town I had lived in my whole life was telling me a story about another town member from long ago. I felt so at HOME. But this is only my second favorite thing about this piece. The rhythm of your words is everything.

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I love it! Couldn't stop reading.

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Love the story. One question: is this Grace or Jenny?

“Herb gives Grace a long hug and whistles for his dog, Toby. 

“I’ll see you in the spring, Gracie. As a customer.”

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